Rarity’s Escape in Manehattan (2024)

“Today’s the day!” Rarity chimed as she bounced out of bed in her hotel room! She was super excited for today as she got out of bed, went to the bathroom, took a long shower, groomed her mane and tail, and got herself ready for the fashion show. The mare then went into the little living room to see her friends, who were already up and about within the massive hotel room they’d rented.

A stampede of foals were running about, and Twilight and Fluttershy were doing their best to keep them in check.

The fashionista trotted across the hotel room as she made her way to her foals, finding them playing with baby Discord and Trixie as they ran around shooting magic at each other. Rarity squeaked, jumping aside as a stray bolt of magic hit a stuffed bunny, and it started hopping around the place!

“Discord! Stop that!” Fluttershy came over and picked him up. “You can play, but you need to be careful.”

The baby draconequus gave his mom pouty puppy dog eyes as he replied, “Sowie! I was just teaching Twixie a new trick!”

“Yeah, he is teaching me how to make pwushies come to wife,” Trixie beamed. “It’s supa coow!”

Then, an explosion occurred as the bathroom nearby erupted with massive walls of pink bubble foam oozing out. Zecora slid out, gurgling and clapping her hooves together as Applejack ran over. “Zecora, what the heck happened!?”

“Just twying to make a potion!” The baby zebra cried. “There were some fancy shampoos. I wanted to twy making a bubble bath, and it wowked!”

“Yeah, it did, but ya gotta be more careful.” Applejack groaned

Rarity sighed; Despite all the times she and her friends had disciplined the foals, they always somehow ended up in trouble. But she also couldn’t help but admire how innocent and adorable they were. She then came over to her adopted foals, doodling together in the playpen. Blueblood smiled as he held up a messy drawing of a big, puffy princess dress, “We hewping with ideas. See? Mine’s a pwetty pwincess dwess!”

Hoity Toity scoffed as he held up an antique-style dress with puffy sleeves and a long, flowing gown. Tis is much bettew! It’s wike a weal pwincess dwess!”

“My faiwy tawe dwess is bettew!” Blueblood humphed.

“They’re both amazing,” Rarity chirped as she took her foals, kissed them both on the cheeks, and checked their diapers. “Oh, they've already changed, I see.”

Fluttershy then came over and she said. “Yes, the foals have all been changed and fed. We didn’t want you to be burdened with dealing with them; they are doing so well. And don’t worry, we’ll have them go out and play in the park to get rid of the excess energy they still have.”

“Thank you, I wanted to give the foals a chance to enjoy Manehattan, and I hope that things won’t be too chaotic.” Rarity replied.

Pinkie Pie hopped over excitedly and exclaimed. “Of course not! I'm sure things will be great! Just be yourself, and you’ll beat the rest of the competition, easy peasy cheesy!”

Rarity perked up a bit. “Of course, Pinkie, I believe my fashion designs will do very well.”

The baby colts then bounced up and down as they shouted together. “Yeah, Mommy, you can do it!”

Rarity bent down and held them close to her chest.“Oh, thank you for coming! I need the support right now.”

Hoity Toity bounced up and down in excitement as he exclaimed. “We here fow ya, Mommy!”

“Yeah, ya make ta best cwothes in ta wowwd! Ya can’t wose!” Blueblood chimed in.

Rarity was touched by her foals and their attitude towards her, so she nuzzled them and said. “Oh, you're such darlings. Now behave and listen to my friends, okay? And please try to stay out of trouble, especially with the toilet.”

“Yes, Mama.” The two foals chimed together.

Rarity then turned towards her friends as Fluttershy slowly trotted over and whispered, “Don’t worry. We will take good care of your babies and make sure nothing bad happens to them this time. You just focus on the competition.”

“Yeah! You go out and win it!” Rainbow Dash cheered. “Just don’t forget we got tickets to see Hinny of the Hills later.”

“Of course I do! It’ll be the first thing we’ll do when I return.” Rarity insisted, then threw her mane back and headed out the door as Twilight came over and said. “I'll come with you just in case Starlight shows up…she already tried getting Fluttershy, we don’t want to take any chances.”

“Oh, please. I doubt she’ll come here. Then again, you can’t be too careful.” Rarity replied as she and Twilight together trotted out the hotel door.

At the fashion show, many of the various candidates of Fashion Week were showing off their new fashion lines to the judges. As Rarity was waiting in anticipation, she watched in horror as Suri showed off her fashion line, and she was furious, stomping a hoof on the ground and grumbling. She had to run backstage to hide her anger and was furious as she felt betrayed by somepony she thought needed help.

As Rarity was heading towards the backstage exit, she saw her nemesis approaching her. The pink-coated earth pony threw back her purple mane with a smirk on her face. “Like my new fashion line, Rarity?”

Rarity reared her head, pointed a hoof, as she shouted. “How dare you! You stole everything I gave you! It was supposed to help, but you just ripped off my entire fashion line!”

Suri raised her head and scoffed. “Of course, and now I'll secure my fashion debut in Manehattan. Don’t forget, you’re presenting after me. So it’ll look like you’re copying me, not the other way around.”

Rarity was beyond rage, her face bright red as she shouted. “How could you act so aloof? Why would you even steal from me?”

Suri just laughed as she waved a hoof in front of her face, “Please, this is what Manehattan is like. I'm just giving you a taste of what’s to come if you want to make it here.”

“If this is how ponies treat each other in Manehattan, it makes me glad I don’t live here.” Rarity grumbled.

“Oh well, I’m sure that will change rather soon.” Suri replied with indifference.

Rarity stepped back at the odd comment, and it occurred to her that Suri should be out on stage showing off her stolen fashion line. She asked. “So you just came here to gloat?”

“Of course not. I’m just here to secure my victory.” Suri ominously declared.

Without warning, Rarity felt some weird dust fall onto her. Then she coughed and wheezed, throwing a hoof in her face. As she coughed and waved a hoof before her, she felt her entire body slowly shrinking! She looked up only to see Suri was standing over her with a smug grin. Rarity then looked down at her tiny pudgy hooves and chubby belly. She reached over her face only to feel a small crop of mane. She peered up back at Suri with an angry look on her face and shouted in a high pitched, squeaky voice. “What did you do to me?!”

“I turned you into a foal, of course,” Suri cackled with glee. She then plopped a pacifier into Rarity’s mouth and laid her on her back as Suri strapped her in a diaper. “Now, now, you don’t want to have an accident. That wouldn’t go over so well with the judges. I just hope you went potty before you got here because you won’t use the bathroom again soon.”

Rarity tried to say something back, but all that came out was baby babble, making Suri laugh: “Sarlight’s new potion works perfectly! Everypony will think you're just a babbling foal now.”

Rarity started to get scared, remembering what had happened to Fluttershy. She tried to say something only to find that there must be an enchantment on the pacifier, as she couldn’t spit it out.

After being diapered, Suri plopped Rarity onto her back. Then they saw a bright flash, turned, and heard. “Buck! Forgot to turn off the flash!”

Suri then turned her head, and Photo Finish was just standing there. Then Suri growled under her breath. “This wasn’t supposed to happen.”

Rarity had hoped that the fashion star would escape and tell somepony.

Photo Finish tried to run but started coughing and wheezing; then the mare slowly regressed into a foal before her. Photo Finish was now a small, chubby, blue-coated foal kicking and shouting at them. Then another earth pony came over and started strapping her in a diaper with a guilty look; she whispered, “Sorry, this wasn’t supposed to happen.”

Suri was angry as she stomped over to her assistant and snapped. “Yeah, it wasn’t! You were supposed to watch for anypony while I regressed Rarity. That was the plan, you idiot!”

The white-coated earth pony bowed, then popped a pacifier into Photo’s mouth and whispered. “I apologized.”

“Well, it’s too late for that. Now I’ve got two foals to take care of. You’re gonna have to help me, Coco. Hope you’re good with diapers.” She then took out two bottles, and she and her assistant plopped them into the mouths of the foals.

Rarity did her best to resist, but the natural instincts to suckle took over. Her eyelids started to become heavy, and her eyes slowly closed, unable to keep herself awake, and she fell into a deep sleep.

Rarity groaned as she started rubbing her head; she felt like her entire body was compressed. She looked down to see that her body was small and chubby, and then she turned to see that she was in a crib. The filly then heard a squelch and sniffed the air, smelling the stench of urine wafting from it. She heard a suckling noise and gurgles and turned to see another blue-coated filly slowing beside her. She came close to the foal and scrutinized her physical features, as she wanted to ensure it was the famous photographer.

The filly had the mare’s features, including a light blue coat, pink eyes, and a white mane and tail. It was Photo Finish! She groaned, realizing that it wasn’t a dream. Then the filly turned to see Suri standing over them with a smirk on her face as she rose up and said, “So how do you like being a foal, hmmm?”

Rarity started to babble angrily at her, shouting all manner of curses and threats. Meanwhile, Suri rolled her eyes and placed a pacifier in her mouth. "This will allow us to talk now. What is it?”

Rarity suckled on it and asked, “Suri, what ya doing?!”

“What does it look like?” Suri rolled her eyes. “I'm removing the competition.”

Rarity continued to eye her, then snapped. “Ya wowkin' with Stawwwight Gwimmew wight!?”

“Yeah, is it that obvious? Of course, I work for Starlight Glimmer, and it’s not enough to steal your designs. I'm sure you would find some way to win,” Suri explained. “But now, with you gone, there’s no way I’ll lose. And Starlight will ensure her little foal utopia is never destroyed. I don’t really care about all that; I just see this as a mutual agreement.”

“Otay wegwessing me makes sense, but why wegwess hew?” Rarity pointed to Photo Finish. “She one of ta judges!”

Suri started to look instead. “You mean Photo Finish? She saw me regress you, so I had to regress her. Now, don’t worry; I won't care for you. I have a fashion show to win. Coco Pommel, get over here!”

A white-coated earth pony with a light blue striped mane appeared. “Yes, mam…?”

Suri thrust a diaper bag into her hooves, then snapped. “You took those foal care courses as I instructed, right?”

The white-coated earth pony gulped and then replied nervously. “Y-yes…”

“Good, so you’ll care for these foals and do what you can to keep them quiet until Starlight comes to take them to her little foal kingdom,” Suri explained. “Can I count on you?”

“Yes, Ms. Suri,” Coco replied.

“Good,” Suri said and stomped off.

As soon as Suri was gone, Coco Pommel then locked the front door and bowed, “I'm sorry for all of this.” She tucked Rarity back under the sheets, plopped a bottle into her mouth, and watched her suckle the contents. The white-coated filly, realizing there was nothing she could do right now, tried to fall back asleep.

Rarity’s Escape in Manehattan (2024)
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